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falcon | 12 Jul 2008

<chuckle> I have to agree with Paul's earlier comment. I am sure you heard about this tiny globe-shaped thingy called 'full stop' (people in the colonies call it a 'period' - which, sadly, makes me think of girls). Many use it to show readers where one sentence ends and a new one starts. You definitely should try using it. You *do* have writing potential. A lot of it. You just need to learn how to use it properly. Please do it - a talent like yours should not be wasted.

B | 22 Jun 2008

We want more Lobb and friends! Good job man.

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