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Comments by people who read the story Lobb.

paul | 25 Jun 2008

Even though I liked the subject, I was left wondering about the way it had been portrayed. Have you, dear writer, ever heard of this old-fashioned practice called 'punctuation'? I really think you ought to try it some time. It makes things that are legible, more readable. It makes a writer into an author. You may have that potential, in my opinion.

ron mutrey | 23 Jun 2008

DON"T STOP WRITING MAN YOU"RE GOOd

brian | 14 Jun 2008

I loved it. Please right a follow up I now there is more to come it has me hot and fired up.

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