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Wild White Boy | 05 Apr 2010

I hope that was only the introduction, cause There's still at least 29 more days of story
left to go!

Thomas | 14 Apr 2008

Not my best work, but it only needs revision at the end. It's the driveway thats 1/4 of a mile long.

Lew | 08 Apr 2008

It could have been a good story, but definitely needed some proof reading. In the beginning it stated that uncle Charles lived two states away, but that the drive there was only 1/4 of a mile.

Maybe a revision?

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