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Comments by people who read the story Jack.
itsNICK | 10 Mar 2011
It is a great story....HOWEVER....it wud be a BETTER with punctuation and quotation marks :-)
alwaysnmyhead | 10 Jul 2010
kid tis is kinda gud...u mite wana work on punctuation and focus on leadn ur sentences, it was kinda hard to read bc of da run ons&absenc of periods
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itsNICK | 10 Mar 2011
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