man u kno it was wrong to stop there let alone befor sat night dang that was to hot hot hot
mwamwahhh | 26 Feb 2010
kin u plzzzz write part two? Best story eva!!! So epic. I like this nd im a girl. So hot. Moremoremore!
Pete | 25 Dec 2009
Thank you all so much for your kind remarks. If you've tried to email me and it didn't go through, you might b e using the address that was hacked. Try Peterbilt1228@live.com; I want to hear from you.
johnny | 08 Apr 2009
fucking hot i love story write a second part PLEASE !
whiteboylova(gayboylova) | 24 May 2008
i think the story was amazing! it was fucking awesome! i think it was really descriptive, but not too descriptive that it would ruin the feelings. I love the characters, and actuality of the story, also.
i write stories too, but i am only a teen, a young teen, do you think i cud get them on this site w/o signing up or whatever?
whiteboylova.the queerboylova.
Johnny | 12 Apr 2008
SUPER SUPER HOT! PLZ WRITE MORE! I WILL LOVE U FOREVER IF YOU DO!!!
Brock Archer | 02 Apr 2008
I liked the interpersonal dynamics among the characters--the way you brought out their personalities as they evolved. I want to know what happens with them when they get together on Saturday.
Aris | 27 Mar 2008
My God! Hot! Hot! Hot!
MIKE | 19 Mar 2008
THIS IS A TOP TEN STORY !!!! THE BEST ON THE BOOK MORE PLEASE!!!!!!
curtis | 19 Dec 2010
mwamwahhh | 26 Feb 2010
Pete | 25 Dec 2009
johnny | 08 Apr 2009
whiteboylova(gayboylova) | 24 May 2008
Johnny | 12 Apr 2008
Brock Archer | 02 Apr 2008
Aris | 27 Mar 2008
MIKE | 19 Mar 2008
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