bryce | 23 May 2012

The CA-CA, POOP part (& farts) almost made me hurl. I thought it was a slightly above average story, until it completely went off the cliff with all the shit talk! Major nasty, felt like their should have been a scat warning label or tag!

George Carson | 05 Apr 2012

This story was SO HOT. I told myself I just wanted a quick story but I wouldn't let myself cum. Of course this story had me shooting all over myself. Ignore what everyone else said, this story just gets hotter and hotter, and I liked the end. Great job.

fulup700 | 14 Jul 2009

Why ruin a piss oriented story with ugly scat at the end? It turned me off rather than on.

John Dawson | 27 Nov 2007

Without the scat, this would be a fantastically sexy story. I like the characters and your writing, but please write another version with no scat!