it breaks my heart. i wanna cry. i love it but its heart breaking
Anon-i-mouse | 16 Oct 2011
What a wonderfully told story. It's a delight to read a story with so much depth and tenderness.
Ranzie | 09 Oct 2011
ranziec39@aim.com You know, it's funny how things worked out. I was impressed with how selfless Ben was with his love and caring and guidance. offering the stud his freedom and allowing the boy to experiense life on his own terms. that truly shows what love is all about. I wish I had learned that lesson when I was growing up. being less possessive would have saved me a lot of heartache. great story. thank you.
curtis | 14 Jan 2011
hey i loved it till then than i got depressed for ben its not right for a loving person to end up alone it is ok that the boy found a wife but ben could have found sombody to love him to im jes sayim
Ashton | 20 Nov 2010
This story is the best homoerotica I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and it WAS a pleasure. Not only incredibly steamy sex scenes but a perfectly written heart-warming, and heart-wrenching, storyline to go with it, this makes the perfect private read. Personally, this gives me several private reads ;) The ending is a poignant romantic tragedy which brought me to tears. Truly this is the best literary work of its genre.
martha | 13 Oct 2010
This story was absolutely amazing. But, it made me almost cry. I REALLY wanted them to be together in the end, and I wanted Jason to love, and commit to Ben, the way Ben was so willing to commit to him... It made me sad, and if you did like an alternate ending of some kind some day I would be SOOOOOOO happy. It's sort of strange how much it would mean to me, and make me happy:)
Kyle | 09 Aug 2010
WOW! THIS STORY WAS ABSOLUTELY PHENOMENAL! I ENJOYED EVERY LAST SECOND OF IT! PETER YOU ARE A WONDERFUL AND WELL SKILLED WRITER. PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE AS BEAUTIFULLY AND AS PASSIONATELY AS YOU DO. THE STORY FELT SO REAL...IT WAS EASY TO IMAGINE AND IT WAS LIKE A MOVIE. I LOVED READING ABOUT BEN & JASON'S RELATIONSHIP. I KNOW THEY LOVED EACH OTHER VERY MUCH! AWESOME! :)
john | 28 Jun 2010
very good story i love it idk how may times i jacked off to it.....you should really consider writing a story about tyler
Ethan | 13 Feb 2010
Very sensual and erotic! I would like so see if Tyler finds someone...
jay | 01 Jan 2010
For some reason I can't see the whole story. The story stops at the adult book store. Will someone tell me what happened next and how the story ends?
Pete | 25 Dec 2009
Thank you all so much for your kind remarks. If you've tried to email me and it didn't go through, you might b e using the address that was hacked. Try Peterbilt1228@live.com; I want to hear from you.
andy | 28 Apr 2009
i loved it, but hated it.... its so unfair that tis fuckin hot guy is shared... no dedication... but bravo. lovit hot.... jacked off twice
sucker | 27 Oct 2008
Best story I've read here. Absolutely fantastic. Keep up the great writing. Keptme hard the whole time.
patrick | 02 Oct 2008
i love peterbilt story
newyorkhunk | 28 Nov 2007
hey. this was a GREAT story man. spent the whole day reading it though. LOVED IT! keep them coming man!
nik | 11 Nov 2011
Anon-i-mouse | 16 Oct 2011
Ranzie | 09 Oct 2011
curtis | 14 Jan 2011
Ashton | 20 Nov 2010
martha | 13 Oct 2010
Kyle | 09 Aug 2010
john | 28 Jun 2010
Ethan | 13 Feb 2010
jay | 01 Jan 2010
Pete | 25 Dec 2009
andy | 28 Apr 2009
sucker | 27 Oct 2008
patrick | 02 Oct 2008
newyorkhunk | 28 Nov 2007
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