rakshika | 02 Jan 2011

pliz z do continue

this is koo | 16 Feb 2009

oh my god
i tried this with a friend
the feeling is so sexy
it reminded me
it would have been better if they were like 2 teenage friends or something not in a church busines thing

BadBlackLion | 14 Oct 2008

this ending gives you the possibility to add another nice story ;) keep it and think about a continueing one

Fire | 16 Aug 2008

Its a good story but I'm confused with the ending. Was it a dream that he had? Is that why no one noticed him while he slept with his head in Andy's crotch and Andy didn't say anything? Am I missing something here? I'll give this a 4/5.

Ken | 19 Jul 2008

This story to me is one of the best stories, because I have done this very thing before, and believe the intensity of that feeling of the other guy shooting off in your mouth is awesome, Thanks for a great story and a wonderful reminder, Thanks and keep up the stories, awesome.

Don | 05 Dec 2007

Talk about HOT !?! An absoutely delicious story! I experienced every moment and 'creamed' at the same time! Great writing!