Gaystoryman | 24 Feb 2010

Thank you all for the comments, it really helps all authors, to hear what our readers think of what we've done. Again, thank you all

Ian

Jim marshall | 17 Feb 2010

Well AAron seemed to get the beter end of the deal, $500.00 plus his bonus of you selfishly pulling his down over you while you pumped him full of the ultimAte fantasy load . You were throbing inside his throat as you "thought" were thinking only of your self, that whole time I was thinking I wish I was Aaron. Poor poor Aaron got his tummy full of your sweet horn maness forced in.
Great story, lots of anticipation built in it, it was sincere and. Edy well expressed. No shortcuts, you did a great job telling a d it will have long lasting rememmberence. You get as nany stars as you can get! Bravo!

David | 25 Dec 2009

Very nicely written and very arousing. You got it just right. A real gem, thanks

lalala | 20 Nov 2008

that was excellent! it was very well written and totally arousing!

aris | 17 Sep 2008

how cheap and sad... the right thing could be
to give the money back to the kid first and then the kid could go on with the blow-job if he wanted it...

Bill | 29 Sep 2007

I liked your story and i liked the thinking behind it. You will be Ok in life if you do what is right as you did in the story. Hugs from an old man.